Crtitique?

Hey!! I just posted some of my new work and I was wondering if I could get some critique on it, it would be very much appreciated considering I still need a lot of work. Any advice?

Right now I advise you to concentrate on full body shading, where you add depth to the whole figure beyond just the outlines. Focusing on how shadows fall can help you with anatomy as well, and for me at least when I took that step it felt pretty satisfying.

This site has some good shading "demos" to try out. Even once you've gotten them covered it's good to use them as warm ups before you draw. If you scroll down they even have a page with outlines that you can print out to use. G'luck!

thank you

As I said in the message that I sent you, work on your arms right now. they are a little too stiff. Once you get that down work on different body poses. I think that will help out too.

Buy an anatomy for artists book, and definitely draw from life observation more. Even if it is not directly related to what you want to do, drawing from life will give you far more insight as to how the human form moves and the shapes it creates.

And I'd agree with kalrarii. Try to avoid outlines and work with value and volume more. Your pictures will have much more depth to them. Hard outlines always... ALWAYS flatten a picture.